Thursday, February 19, 2009

THE BEST THING THAT HAPPENED TO ME




Life isn’t as it used to be..
Time now passes rather swiftly.
I think of him each day,
And everyday I feel my passion increase slowly.
He aint here with me, far away is he..
Yet, he seems to be right beside me.
Certainly, he is the best thing that ever happened to me!
He is often with me in the dreams I see,
Hand in hand by the deep blue sea,
The sand kisses our bare feet lightly
While the sun beams at us brightly.
Softly he whispers to me,
Then, slowly, he comes ahead and kisses me.
This moment is captured in my memory.
Where it shall dwell for eternity.

Its now time, I couldn’t have loved him more.
But then again something keeps telling the same in my core.
Things aren’t as it used to be before.
Everyday I love him more and more.

And so shall it be as days go by,
Our love will only blossom under the crimson sky.


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--Ekata Banerjee

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25 comments:

  1. ARINDAM DEYFebruary 19, 2009 at 5:13 PM

    wonderful poem.... keep it going!!!

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  2. AninditaFebruary 20, 2009 at 1:20 AM

    gr8 job!! :0 i must say....
    it hink its d best poem u've evr written....really beautiful!!:)

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  3. 123February 20, 2009 at 7:38 PM

    "Hand in hand by the deep blue sea,
    The sand kisses our bare feet lightly
    While the sun beams at us brightly.
    Softly he whispers to me,
    Then, slowly, he comes ahead and kisses me."

    Liked the sublime yet innocent visualization in the above lines v much ... Keep writing :)

    - Novo

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2009 at 9:54 PM

    A soft beautiful poem, well written !!!!!! Defines the feeling completely!!!! But just one question how could u express it soo well without feeling it in real ;)

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  5. YoaddyMarch 6, 2009 at 9:25 PM

    well . . softy written , magical moments - written wonderfully !!! A piece of work !!!! Touched sky !

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  6. Mohana,da BSB freakMarch 7, 2009 at 12:38 PM

    awesome poem...beautifully written....waiting 4 more like this

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  7. ShreyaMarch 7, 2009 at 3:55 PM

    im out of words!!!!tui eta likhli ki kore??????

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  8. Ekata BanerjeeMarch 21, 2009 at 3:50 PM

    Thanks people..Wrote dis poem b4 my chemistry paper..boredom givs birth 2 creativity! ;)

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  9. «« hAdez »»April 21, 2009 at 3:21 PM

    love chmistry b4 chemical one ;)

    Nice thought and well written.

    [what happened to the ppr then :P ]

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  10. UnknownApril 23, 2009 at 9:23 PM

    well d first thing i wanna ask is
    from where do u think?
    i mean d imagination.
    dats so pristine. wonderful wud be underestimated.fantabulous.
    i had heard abt u frm puja.

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  11. Ekata BanerjeeApril 24, 2009 at 12:15 PM

    thanks 'hadez' n Aditya keep coming back for new posts :)

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  12. The SeekerApril 28, 2009 at 1:19 PM

    wow!!!!!!!!!!! thats seriously awesome!!

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  13. Ekata BanerjeeApril 28, 2009 at 2:44 PM

    thanks dipika..keep comin back for new posts.. :)

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  14. AnonymousMay 17, 2009 at 3:23 PM

    man dis one really roxxxx.......... i wish i cud write dis well...........

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  15. Ekata BanerjeeMay 17, 2009 at 4:56 PM

    Thanks but i'd b glad if u disclosed ur identity..how did u get my blog reference??

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  16. CRDJuly 13, 2009 at 5:06 PM

    Well, ur feelings came thru nicely.

    but perhaps you tried too hard to make words rhyme. Rhyme is not really important gal. Sometimes, its ok to sacrifice rhyme for depth :)

    But good work, you can do better :)

    Cheers
    CRD

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  17. AarthyJuly 13, 2009 at 5:27 PM

    wonderful poem which brings out the inner feeling of one's heart...good work :)

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  18. Ekata BanerjeeJuly 13, 2009 at 5:33 PM

    thanks 'CRD'..didn't try to rhyme d whole of it tho..but thanks for ur sugesstion i'll entertain it d next time i write a poem..:)

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  19. Ekata BanerjeeJuly 13, 2009 at 5:33 PM

    thanks 'Anto'..keep coming back for newer posts..

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  20. AdishaJuly 13, 2009 at 9:33 PM

    Lovely !!!

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  21. Ekata BanerjeeJuly 13, 2009 at 9:45 PM

    Thanks Adisha :)

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  22. ShekharJuly 13, 2009 at 11:10 PM

    hand in Hand by deep blue see,One romantic ain't u?

    A great write...tc

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  23. Ekata BanerjeeJuly 13, 2009 at 11:17 PM

    thnks Raj..n i've already commented on ur blog.. :)

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  24. UnknownJuly 14, 2009 at 8:10 PM

    After reading this I'm totally convinced that 'Voice of the Heart' is a really apt title for this blog!

    I guess I'll really have to keep coming back for more... :)

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  25. Ekata BanerjeeJuly 14, 2009 at 8:42 PM

    Thanks Sagar :)

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